Provide some general feedback to your peer about their assignment. Let them know what they did well and what they could have done differently.

Dear Peer,

I have reviewed your assignment and I am impressed with your work. Your understanding of the subject matter is clearly reflected in your assignment. The way you presented your arguments was logical and well-structured, which made it easy to follow your line of thought. Your research was thorough and it was evident that you put a lot of effort into it.

However, there are a few areas that could use some improvement. While your content was strong, there were a few grammatical errors that slightly disrupted the flow of your writing. I would suggest proofreading your work or using a grammar checking tool to avoid such mistakes in the future.

Additionally, while your arguments were well-structured, they could have been more concise. Try to express your thoughts more succinctly to make your points stronger and clearer.

Lastly, although your research was thorough, it would have been beneficial to include more sources to support your arguments. This would not only strengthen your arguments but also show a wider range of research.

Overall, you did a great job on this assignment. Keep up the good work and consider these points for your future assignments.

Best, [Your Name]